托福独立写作经典话题(一)
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“家庭与朋友”是托福独立写作的经典话题之一。今天,马老师将用一道托福TPO真题来分析这个经典话题,干货很多一定要仔细看。

 

 

Which way do you think is the best for students to make new friends?

A: Joining a sports team;

B: Participating in community activities;

C: Travelling.

 

一、参考范文

At present, it is widely believed, that students can make new friends in various ways. In fact, the best method to build friendship with each other has been a topic of public concern. Some people suggest that travelling is the best way to make friends with each other while others are in favor of participating in community activities. However, in my point of view, I prefer joining a sports team, which offers the most opportunities to individuals on making new friends.

 

Firstly, the chances provided by the sports team make the friendship between members easier to form. It is mainly because the training of the sports team usually has its regular schedule and the extensive agenda brings in many opportunities for members in the sports team to communicate, which leads to the relation between members prone to be turned into friendship. Taking Tom, one member I know in the basketball team of our school, as an example, he has made several close friends in his team. According to his feedback, the members in the team are demanded to take 14 hours of exercise every week, which is quite extensive for most members. During the break time of training, Tom and his team members find that they have many common interests, such as watching professional games like NBA, CBA, and so on. He told me that they are friends just like brothers now. Therefore, it can be ensured that the sports team will create numerous chances for its members to form strong friendships.

 

Secondly, the common goal the members share in the sport team can lead to stronger friendships within team members. The main reason is that the members can establish trust and tacit agreement during the process of achieving a common goal. Taking the basketball team where Tom plays as an example, their common goal is to win the state championship. Through multiple games to win the championship of 2012, the members achieved a better understanding about each other. In fact, every one learned many things about their team members’ merits and demerits, and even about their characters. Since knowing each other, they felt all members were trustful and even reached a tacit agreement about their members. In addition, the cooperation of them made their relationship tighter. When they finally won the championship, a sound friendship within each member has been formed. Consequently, the effect of a common goal in a sports team is undeniable and apparent and it indeed can be beneficial to lead to a strong friendship.

 

Admittedly, other methods to make friends might also be feasible. Taking part in community activities and travelling can make students’ social life more meaningful. However, considering the forming process of friendship, joining a sports team should be a more reasonable approach. Besides, community activities might be boring and travelling might cause some accidents.

 

In conclusion, I firmly insist on joining a sports team, rather than participating in community activities and travelling, is the best way for students to make new friends.

 

 

二、范文点评

这篇文章以经典的四要素开场。值得注意的是,铺垫的给定相对比较笼统。对于题目设定的话题,笔者的观点是:“加入一个运动队是让学生结交新朋友的最佳方式。”在具体的论证过程中,作者从两个角度展开论述,即“交流机会”和“共同目标”。在论述分论点时,文章细致参照了本书中介绍的论证方式,运用了本书所主张的论证方法。在让步段中,作者谈及了另外两种交友方式的特点和弊端所在。从一定程度上,作者也由此否定了另外两种交友方式。在结尾段中,作者对观点进行了重申。总之,本文以逻辑关系的细致性见长,语言难度不大,重点推荐打字速度较快、逻辑能力较强的考生仔细参考、学习。

 

 

三、经典词组和句型

individual [ˌɪndɪˈvɪdʒuəl] n. 个体;个人 adj. 个别的;单独的

extensive [ɪkˈstensɪv] adj. 广大的;广阔的;全面的

tacit [ˈtæsɪt] adj. 默认的;默许的;不言而喻的

merit [ˈmerɪt] n. 良好品质;价值;优点 v. 值得;应受到

sound [saʊnd] adj.(身体)健康的;可靠的;明智的

feasible [ˈfi ːzəb(ə)l] adj. 可行的;行得通的

prone to ...:倾向于……

in favor of:赞成;支持;有利于

consequently, the effect of ... is undeniable and apparent and it indeed can be

benefi cial to ...:因此,……的作用是不可否认、显而易见的,它确实有益于……

 

 

以上就是华樱外语马老师整理的托福独立写作经典话题——“家庭与朋友”的范文与解析。

 

 

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